Nice work! I felt that you have a very interesting little action in beginning part of
your short & I especially liked the narrator. Nice Performance!
My only few nip pic here are the animation & some of the voice acting.
Don't get me wrong, I'm mostly preferring to the background characters and other
then that...the rest of the parts were OK at best. Lastly besides the voice acting of the narrator... I felt that the rest were pretty poor. But overall Good Job ^^